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短文改错 很急xiaohua's father bought her the new bike the day befo

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短文改错 很急xiaohua's father bought her the new bike the day before yesterday,which it
xiaohua's father bought her the new bike the day before yesterday,which it made her very excited .so she rode it fast on the road .seeing a man get lose to her .xiaohua couldn't stop it and as a result ,she knocked onto the man.being very kind ,the man didn't scold her at all .instead,he told her how dangerously it was to ride a bike so fast .he asked her keep the lesson in mind .xiaohua felt regretful but ashamed .she promised to keep the lesson in mind for ever ,
短文改错 很急xiaohua's father bought her the new bike the day befo
xiaohua's father bought her the(改为a) new bike the day before yesterday,which it(it删去) made her very excited . so she rode it fast on the road . seeing a man get(改为getting) close to her .xiaohua couldn't stop it and as a result ,she knocked onto(改为into) the man. being very kind ,the man didn't scold her at all .instead,he told her how dangerously(改为dangerous) it was to ride a bike so fast . he asked her keep(keep前面加一个to) the lesson in mind . xiaohua felt regretful but(but改为and) ashamed . she promised to keep the lesson in mind for ever ,

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再问: 后面还有几句 帮下 谢谢 then, the man bent down and begin to repair her bike. after a while ,he got them repaired.xiaohua was greatly moved .she thanked the man and left him happily . how an unforgettable experience she had that day! 晚安
再答: begin改为began 最后一行的how改为what 其余应该没问题了