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请英语高手帮助修改以下短文中的错误,使之通顺
My name is LIhua ,I've finished my undergraduate education in Xiehe Institue.As you see ,It's a pity that I didn't major in communication specialty ,but I'am very interested in Programming Language,especially developing web Application ,So ,One day,I find a small device which can run software ,It will help produce smaller servers improve the way we live.So if possible,I think some device can be machined that I want to get by development board.like Indoor navigation or NFC System.I really like it and I belive this will be become My research.
尽量口语化一点,因为这是为一个问题做回答,太正式会露馅
请英语高手帮助修改以下短文中的错误,使之通顺
I am LiHua who have finished my undergraduate education in the XieHe Institue. However, it's a pity that I was not a student of the communication major in the computer technology and science. Because I am interested in the Computer Language Programming,especially in developing the Web Application. One day, I find a small device which can run softwares that help produce smaller services and improve the way we live. Thus , I am concerning about the possibility of some devices that can be mechanised,so I can get by development board like Indoor Navigation or NFC system. I like it so much that I want to make it my research.
再问: 谢谢,能否非常口语化呢?因为这是一个回答,这样的话可能会露馅,感觉提前准备了
再答: Hello, everybody. I am LiHua . I just have finished my undergraduate education in the XieHe Institue. However,it's a pity for me . Because I wanted to be a communication student in the computer technology and science ,but i was not. Whatever, I am interested in the Computer Language Programming,especially in developing the Web Application. One day, I find a small device . And this device can run softwares that help produce smaller services and improve the way we live. Thus , I am thinking about the possibility of some devices. If it can be mechanised, I can get the results by development board like Indoor Navigation or NFC system. I like it so much that I want to make it my research. 其实我还比较困惑,你先是学的什么专业,然后在某个机构上班还是学习也好,现在是要去面试一个新的专业岗位么?我觉得逻辑上前后不一致。你从这个机构毕业了,但是很遗憾没有成为信息专业的学生?这个怎么理解,然后你又要写论文还是研究。我只是根据你的英语翻译原文进行的推测,因为你说这是个问题,然后我在回答这个问题,我希望能够给你一个比较满意的答案,你也能得到你想要的结果。嘿嘿嘿嘿
再问: 是研究生面试,我之前学的专业和要报考通讯专业的八竿子打不着,纯粹是喜欢才选这个专业,说了说为什么喜欢,而且提到了我将来的研究方向将会是利用开发板进行室内定位和NFC相关的系统研究
再答: 恩恩 恩恩 这下明白了 ,我个人认为哈 ,你如果是准备面试的话 ,前面学的又不是这个专业,那么你需要更多的细节来支撑,比如说你曾经在这个报考专业做过些什么具体的,这样会比较好。更加有说服力么 。