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帮我看下我的这篇英语作文通不通顺,有无病句,感激不尽.
My view on Balanced Personal Development It goes without saying that balanced personal development is of great importance to us nowadays.But what on earth is balanced personal development?Well,to my mind,it means that we should not only do a good job in our studies,but also in other aspects,such as virtue,social gathering,communication and the abilities to deal with all kinds of problems.As we know,virtue is also important to a person.In addition,I want to study literature,biology,chemistry,and knowledge.Although there are some hard,but i think that life is full.Every day i often work out and play football,basketball and badminton and tennis.Not delay the case studies,an increase of knowledge and practice,it is both good things.I'm going to be of all-round development of good student,for my future development bba acc fin paves the way.
My view on Balanced Personal Development It goes without saying that balanced personal development is of great importance to us nowadays.But what on earth is balanced personal development?Well,to my mind,it means that we should not only do a good job in our studies,but also in other aspects,such as virtue,social gathering,communication and the abilities to deal with all kinds of problems.As we know,virtue is also important to a person.In addition,I want to study literature,biology,chemistry,and knowledge.Although there are some hard,but i think that life is full.Every day i often work out and play football,basketball and badminton and tennis.Not delay the case studies,an increase of knowledge and practice,it is both good things.I'm going to be of all-round development of good student,for my future development bba acc fin paves the way.
错漏很多哦,而且很多中式英文,单词的词性用法有误,单复数的运用也有误.
1、It goes without saying that 要改为：There is no doubt that 或者It is of no doubt that...
2、virtue,social gathering,communication and the abilities to deal with all kinds of problems.这里有逻辑错误,首先and连接的必须是同类事物.但是道德、聚会、交流、解决问题的能力,很明显不是同类事物来的,建议以后不要为了拼长句凑字数,来盲目添加单词进同一个句子.
3、literature,biology,chemistry,and knowledge 这个也是跟2同样的问题!逻辑错误.knowledge 知识本身就包含了前面的文学、生物、化学了.
4、Although there are some hard,but ...首先,要表达困难,这里应该用名词的difficulties,hard是形容词,不能用在这里.其次,已经有although来引导让步状语从句了,就不能用but.
5、life is full?这句是要表达什么呢?意义未明哦
6、Every day i often work out 已经有every day了,就不能用often.因为这2个词都是表示频率的,放在一起就矛盾了.
7、Not delay the case studies,an increase of knowledge and practice,it is both good things.这句也是表意不清!而且,both是两者,要用复数的,跟前面的it is不能连用.
8、I'm going to be of all-round development of good student 想要表达我会成为一个全面发展的好学生的话,应该是：I'm going to be an all-round developed student.
9、for my future development bba acc fin paves the way.bba acc?在要说什么?
1、It goes without saying that 要改为：There is no doubt that 或者It is of no doubt that...
2、virtue,social gathering,communication and the abilities to deal with all kinds of problems.这里有逻辑错误,首先and连接的必须是同类事物.但是道德、聚会、交流、解决问题的能力,很明显不是同类事物来的,建议以后不要为了拼长句凑字数,来盲目添加单词进同一个句子.
3、literature,biology,chemistry,and knowledge 这个也是跟2同样的问题!逻辑错误.knowledge 知识本身就包含了前面的文学、生物、化学了.
4、Although there are some hard,but ...首先,要表达困难,这里应该用名词的difficulties,hard是形容词,不能用在这里.其次,已经有although来引导让步状语从句了,就不能用but.
5、life is full?这句是要表达什么呢?意义未明哦
6、Every day i often work out 已经有every day了,就不能用often.因为这2个词都是表示频率的,放在一起就矛盾了.
7、Not delay the case studies,an increase of knowledge and practice,it is both good things.这句也是表意不清!而且,both是两者,要用复数的,跟前面的it is不能连用.
8、I'm going to be of all-round development of good student 想要表达我会成为一个全面发展的好学生的话,应该是：I'm going to be an all-round developed student.
9、for my future development bba acc fin paves the way.bba acc?在要说什么?