英语演讲!帮小改下!My 2008 Good morning,Everyone!I’m Chendu,from doub

英语演讲!帮小改下!
My 2008
Good morning,Everyone!I’m Chendu,from double 10 middle school.Today I am very pleased to have this opportunity to stand here.
It's known that 2008 Olympic Games is getting closer and closer to us.We need to take actions from now on to prepare for the game.As a student of junior high,I can do my own part.
firstly,we should try our best to study English well and then we are able to help the foreigners,such as show them the way they don’t know.
secondly,we should take actions to look after our environment to reduce the pollution and keep our cities clean and beautiful.
I am proud to be a Chinese.I strongly hope that our country become much stronger and stronger.I am looking forward to Year 2008.I will say to the world aloud:Welcome to China,welcome to Beijing.
Thank you!Everyone!
试着根据文章给我提问题.
比如说what will you do for protecting the environment?

那个I am looking forward to Year 2008不用那个YEAR.
I am looking forward to 2008这样就可以.
Today I am very pleased to have this opportunity to stand here.最好改成
It's my pleasure to have this opportunity to give out my speech here.
还有,一般的正式用语不用缩写,所以Don't要改成Do not.
We need to take actions from now on to prepare for the game.
改成
We need to take actions from now on to prepare for the olympic.
firstly,we should try our best to study English well and then we are able to help the foreigners,such as show them the way they don’t know.
我给你重新写了一段,和上面把一段一样的意思,但是语法和用词会正式一点.
Firstly,we should try to train our English well,so we have the ability to help the foreigners and communicate with them.
Through the comunication with the foreigners,we can tell them the history and the culture of China.
keep our cities clean and beautiful.
不用写cities,写city 就可以.
I'm proud to be a CHinese people.会好一点.
I strongly hope that our country become much stronger and stronger
那个That不用了.
I will say to the world aloud:Welcome to China,welcome to Beijing.
I will announce to the world in a clear loud voice:Welcome to China,welcome to Beijing.
Questions
1.How do we train our english?
2.How do we protect our environment?
3.What should we say to the foriegners?
4.How do we tell other peoples to protect the environment?
5.Why do we have to do these things?
6.How do we help the foriegners?