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How to keep healthy Obesity is a big problem all over the world .Many people have obesity in the world. People eat more food would put on weight .Some people only eat hamburgers meat and pork .they don't have vegetables .So ,they can't have a balanced diet .A unhealthy diet makes them fater and fater . People should have a balanced diet.Everyone should have vegetables and fruits everyday.Because vegetables and fruits could help your body away from the illness .You shouldn't always eat fast food ,like cola ,hamburgers ,sandwiches,etc.They are not good for your body .And you also need exercisesm.Because sports would make you sleep well . If you have a balanced diet and often play games in the open air .I believe that you will have a strong body 请老师按照25分的标准给分。谢谢！！
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How to keep healthy
Obesity is a big problem all over the world .Many people have obesity in the world.
People eat more food would put on weight .Some people only eat hamburgers meat and pork .they don't have vegetables .So ,they can't have a balanced diet .A unhealthy diet makes them fater and fater .
People should have a balanced diet.Everyone should have vegetables and fruits everyday.Because vegetables and fruits could help your body away from the illness .You shouldn't always eat fast food ,like cola ,hamburgers ,sandwiches,etc.They are not good for your body .And you also need exercisesm.Because sports would make you sleep well .
If you have a balanced diet and often play games in the open air .I believe that you will have a strong body 1、 这是个错句。Eat和would put on都是谓语动词，出现在一个句子中是错误的。记住千万不能按照汉语顺序来翻译英语。改法有2个：1）People eating more food would put on weight . 2）People who eat more food would put on weight . 2、 拼写错误：fatter and fatter 3、 阻止……不是help，是keep……from……或protect……from……（保护） 4、 拼写错误？exercise 5、 全文语病较少，结构合理，基本合格。给分19分。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略
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谢谢对老师的信任！
How to keep healthy
Obesity is a big problem all over the world .Many people have obesity in the world.
People eat more food would put on weight .Some people only eat hamburgers meat and pork .they don't have vegetables .So ,they can't have a balanced diet .A unhealthy diet makes them fater and fater .
People should have a balanced diet.Everyone should have vegetables and fruits everyday.Because vegetables and fruits could help your body away from the illness .You shouldn't always eat fast food ,like cola ,hamburgers ,sandwiches,etc.They are not good for your body .And you also need exercisesm.Because sports would make you sleep well .
If you have a balanced diet and often play games in the open air .I believe that you will have a strong body 1、 这是个错句。Eat和would put on都是谓语动词，出现在一个句子中是错误的。记住千万不能按照汉语顺序来翻译英语。改法有2个：1）People eating more food would put on weight . 2）People who eat more food would put on weight . 2、 拼写错误：fatter and fatter 3、 阻止……不是help，是keep……from……或protect……from……（保护） 4、 拼写错误？exercise 5、 全文语病较少，结构合理，基本合格。给分19分。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略