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检查一下我的英语作文,提点意见
Everyone has a lot of dreams.Some people want to be rich,Others want to be famous.I have a lot of dreams,too.When I was a young girl,I dreamed of becoming a musician like Beethoven in future.So I learned the piano very hard.
I think music is very relaxing.Beethoven was a great musician.I like him very much .A little difficult to learn the piano,but very interesting.
I belive i can become a musician.
帮忙检查一下有无语法错误,用词错误或是病句.我要进行演讲,大家能否提点建议,没经验
Everyone has a lot of dreams.Some people want to be rich,Others want to be famous.I have a lot of dreams,too.When I was a young girl,I dreamed of becoming a musician like Beethoven in future.So I learned the piano very hard.
I think music is very relaxing.Beethoven was a great musician.I like him very much .A little difficult to learn the piano,but very interesting.
I belive i can become a musician.
帮忙检查一下有无语法错误,用词错误或是病句.我要进行演讲,大家能否提点建议,没经验
1.in future改成in the future(in future一般用在带命令口气的祈使句里）
2.learned piano改成learned to play piano
3.倒数第二句最后一行A little difficult to learn the .在最前面加It's (It's a bit difficult to play the piano well,but I think it interesting to have a try.)
另外,楼上的,你算什么英语老师啊?混饭吃啊?
总之,你写得还算不错的
2.learned piano改成learned to play piano
3.倒数第二句最后一行A little difficult to learn the .在最前面加It's (It's a bit difficult to play the piano well,but I think it interesting to have a try.)
另外,楼上的,你算什么英语老师啊?混饭吃啊?
总之,你写得还算不错的
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