百度作业网英语作文改错 高手帮忙呀
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英语作文改错 高手帮忙呀
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little(改为less) aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy(改为toys).I was happy when the toys worked,but when things did wrong,I got angry and broke it(改为them).For a while parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which(改为what) was happening.When I tear(改为tore) apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,"That's it.No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must（改为could） make my toys to (去掉to)last My attitude changed from then on