朋友的英语日记求帮修改
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朋友的英语日记求帮修改
My child will be born in two months' time,I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these day.It is not easy to creat a good name for baby,especially in our country.I have to think a lot,such as what the name means,if it souds good,maybe the most important thing about the name is if the name is lucky,so I also have to think of the baby's birthday.But the baby has not been borned yet!
My child will be born in two months' time,I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these day.It is not easy to creat a good name for baby,especially in our country.I have to think a lot,such as what the name means,if it souds good,maybe the most important thing about the name is if the name is lucky,so I also have to think of the baby's birthday.But the baby has not been borned yet!
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My child will be born in two months' time(去掉‘time),I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these day(days).It is not easy to creat(create,但我觉得用make就可以了) a good name for(加上a) baby,especially in our country.I have to think a lot,such as what the name means,if it souds(sounds) good,maybe the most important thing (去掉thing)about the name is if the name is lucky,so I also have to think of the baby's birthday.But the baby has not been borned (born)yet!
所以改后应该是(注意标点符合)
My child will be born in two months.I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these days.It is not easy to make a good name for a baby,especially in our country.I have to think a lot,such as what the name means,if it sounds good.Maybe the most important is if the name is lucky,so I also have to think of the baby's birthday.But the baby has not been born yet!
所以改后应该是(注意标点符合)
My child will be born in two months.I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these days.It is not easy to make a good name for a baby,especially in our country.I have to think a lot,such as what the name means,if it sounds good.Maybe the most important is if the name is lucky,so I also have to think of the baby's birthday.But the baby has not been born yet!