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From what has been discussed above,I can safely draw the con

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From what has been discussed above,I can safely draw the conclusive that we
should take training course.despite training course have some defects.It benefit
outwiehits defects.So,we should accept it use a different perspective.
就是这段话的最后一句So,we should accept it use a different perspective.老师说我写的有很大问题,我想写的内容是"所以,我们应该接受它并用一个不同的视角去看待它“,我想问的就是我怎么写错了还有就是要是改应该怎么改才能改对啊,
From what has been discussed above,I can safely draw the con
错就错在一个句子你用了两个动词,而且不是在从句或非谓语上用的,【accept】和【use】
应该改为:
【Therefore, we are supposed to take it and analyse in a different perspective.】
我把你里边一些用的不是很好的单词都换了.
比如【so】【should】太常用了,不能增加文章亮点度,【Therefore/Thereby】和【be supposed to】会好一点
【接受】不能直接译成【accept】,太中文化了,应用【take】

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