百度作业网高中英语改错,改六个.
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高中英语改错,改六个.
we all have a strong desire to succeed.
For some the desire is great than that of the average people.
In fact,everyone wants to be succeddful but very few are willing to pay the price of hard working.
success is an attitude and has no real secrets.It all starts with your belief system.
Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself.
You must at first believe in yourself.
On your journey to success,you will find that there are no shortcuts.
You will never be able to completely master every detail of your life.
Attempting to do so will only lead to disappointment.
Besides,it's necessary of you to have clear goals.
You'd better put your goals on paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progress.
we all have a strong desire to succeed.
For some the desire is great than that of the average people.
In fact,everyone wants to be succeddful but very few are willing to pay the price of hard working.
success is an attitude and has no real secrets.It all starts with your belief system.
Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself.
You must at first believe in yourself.
On your journey to success,you will find that there are no shortcuts.
You will never be able to completely master every detail of your life.
Attempting to do so will only lead to disappointment.
Besides,it's necessary of you to have clear goals.
You'd better put your goals on paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progress.
great---greater
succeddful-- successful
working---work
what you feel--- how you feel
at first---first
there are no---there is no
再问： For some the desire is great than that of the average people 这句的the 要去掉吗，我觉得 多余诶。。。既然some 了 为什么又有the呢，the不是定冠词吗
再答： 第一个the是必要的，因为是特指上句提到的desire 第二个也是，因为特指人群。
再问： some和the 可以同时修饰一个desire吗？？？还有，successful是我打错了。。。。再找一个
再答： some这里修饰的是人不是desire，“对某些人来说” necessary of--- necessary for
再问： believe in sb 和believe sb 都可以吗？ 他们有什么区别？
再答： 这里最好加上in，表示有信心，没有 in 的话表示相信一个人的信任
succeddful-- successful
working---work
what you feel--- how you feel
at first---first
there are no---there is no
再问： For some the desire is great than that of the average people 这句的the 要去掉吗，我觉得 多余诶。。。既然some 了 为什么又有the呢，the不是定冠词吗
再答： 第一个the是必要的，因为是特指上句提到的desire 第二个也是，因为特指人群。
再问： some和the 可以同时修饰一个desire吗？？？还有，successful是我打错了。。。。再找一个
再答： some这里修饰的是人不是desire，“对某些人来说” necessary of--- necessary for
再问： believe in sb 和believe sb 都可以吗？ 他们有什么区别？
再答： 这里最好加上in，表示有信心，没有 in 的话表示相信一个人的信任