看图作文 急 求思路
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解题思路: 如下
解题过程:
就内容层面, 要结合要点和细节展开写作,如第一幅图的要点是到达基地,细节为乘坐校车、教师分组、周围环境衬托。第二幅图的要点是我们跳断桥,细节是心理活动。第三幅图的要点是翻越逃生墙,细节是大家努力。最后一幅图的要点是合影留念,细节是我们的心情和收获。
就文章的组织结构来讲, 要具有分段意识,可以每幅图一段,亦可安排为总分总的三段式,这样设计出来的文章要求字数在150左右。开头结尾要有所包装和设计,句段之间有必要的衔接。
就语言形式方面, 要注意语言的多样性,从词句两方面着手练习,掌握常见图画的写作方法 。
范文:
Had it not been for the hard-won opportunity given by our mother school, we would not have participated in the outward bound. Last Friday, I, together with my classmates, headed for the Outward Bound Centre merrily by the school bus in that the charming view significantly feasted our eyes as well as the coming activity seemed exciting but challenging.
Upon arrival, we were sorted into several groups under the guidance of our coach. The first impression of the meaningful day was the dangerous broken bridge. Owing to the fact that most of us were new to it, I was extremely frightened. The encouragement of the coach and our spirit of teamwork, however, helped me make it.
The second impression of the unforgettable experience was climbing over the wall to “escape”. We spared no effort to make contributions to the program; as a consequence, all the participants succeeded in achieving the goal. Everything finished, we felt exhausted but delighted.
Next came the most satisfying moment. A picture of all members was taken to memorize this extracurricular activity. Awards such as “Prize for teamwork” and “Prize for courage” were sent to those who stood out.
Please allow me to express my sincere appreciation to this extracurricular activity, for not only did we win trust of others, but also build up courage as well as improve sense of cooperation.
最终答案:略
解题过程:
就内容层面, 要结合要点和细节展开写作,如第一幅图的要点是到达基地,细节为乘坐校车、教师分组、周围环境衬托。第二幅图的要点是我们跳断桥,细节是心理活动。第三幅图的要点是翻越逃生墙,细节是大家努力。最后一幅图的要点是合影留念,细节是我们的心情和收获。
就文章的组织结构来讲, 要具有分段意识,可以每幅图一段,亦可安排为总分总的三段式,这样设计出来的文章要求字数在150左右。开头结尾要有所包装和设计,句段之间有必要的衔接。
就语言形式方面, 要注意语言的多样性,从词句两方面着手练习,掌握常见图画的写作方法 。
范文:
Had it not been for the hard-won opportunity given by our mother school, we would not have participated in the outward bound. Last Friday, I, together with my classmates, headed for the Outward Bound Centre merrily by the school bus in that the charming view significantly feasted our eyes as well as the coming activity seemed exciting but challenging.
Upon arrival, we were sorted into several groups under the guidance of our coach. The first impression of the meaningful day was the dangerous broken bridge. Owing to the fact that most of us were new to it, I was extremely frightened. The encouragement of the coach and our spirit of teamwork, however, helped me make it.
The second impression of the unforgettable experience was climbing over the wall to “escape”. We spared no effort to make contributions to the program; as a consequence, all the participants succeeded in achieving the goal. Everything finished, we felt exhausted but delighted.
Next came the most satisfying moment. A picture of all members was taken to memorize this extracurricular activity. Awards such as “Prize for teamwork” and “Prize for courage” were sent to those who stood out.
Please allow me to express my sincere appreciation to this extracurricular activity, for not only did we win trust of others, but also build up courage as well as improve sense of cooperation.
最终答案:略