百度作业网帮我看看英语演讲稿有没有错误,这是一部分
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帮我看看英语演讲稿有没有错误,这是一部分
Today,I want to introduce a Japanese anime(日漫).However,I am afraid that our Englishteacher will be angry.So I want you to choose the speech I will talk about.SCENT OFA WOMAN OR ANGEL BEATS.
ANGELBEATS:
Thisanime is talking about a world after death.Everyone who came to this world isdying with regret.If they want to continue living in this world after thedeath,they must fight with the enemy who called angels.Ifthey satisfy their regret of their lifetime,they will disappear from thisworld.Itsounds ridiculous.Because if they stay in this world ,it means that theystill have regret.If they could die without regret,then they must disappear.
Thereis an amazing thing.Because this is the world after death,people in thisworld no matter how much they are hurt,even though they are cut into pieces,they will restore the original after a while.That means they willnever die.
Now,let's watch this anime.
Afterwatching this anime,I feel mixed feelings.This anime can make me laugh andcry at the same time.Overall,I think this is a very good anime.But remember,youshould watch it during your winter holiday.We need to study for our final examnow.
Today,I want to introduce a Japanese anime(日漫).However,I am afraid that our Englishteacher will be angry.So I want you to choose the speech I will talk about.SCENT OFA WOMAN OR ANGEL BEATS.
ANGELBEATS:
Thisanime is talking about a world after death.Everyone who came to this world isdying with regret.If they want to continue living in this world after thedeath,they must fight with the enemy who called angels.Ifthey satisfy their regret of their lifetime,they will disappear from thisworld.Itsounds ridiculous.Because if they stay in this world ,it means that theystill have regret.If they could die without regret,then they must disappear.
Thereis an amazing thing.Because this is the world after death,people in thisworld no matter how much they are hurt,even though they are cut into pieces,they will restore the original after a while.That means they willnever die.
Now,let's watch this anime.
Afterwatching this anime,I feel mixed feelings.This anime can make me laugh andcry at the same time.Overall,I think this is a very good anime.But remember,youshould watch it during your winter holiday.We need to study for our final examnow.
因为考虑到是演讲稿,所以除了改错之外,我把几处改的更口语化了一些,你看一下吧~
Today,I want to introduce a Japanese anime(日漫). I am afraid our English teacher will be angry, so I want you just to choose the speech I will talk about. SCENT OFA WOMAN OR ANGEL BEATS.
ANGELBEATS:
This anime shows the world after death. Everyone who comes to this world dies with regret. If they want to continue living in this world after their death, they must fight with the enemy whose name is angel. If they have cleared up their regret in their lives, they will disappear in this after-death world. It may sound ridiculous. But in fact, if they stay in this world, it means that they still have something to regret, and if they could die without regret, then they must disappear.
There is an amazing thing. As this anime is about the world after death, people in it will restore to their original state after a while, no matter how serious they are hurt, even though they have been cut into pieces.That means they will never die.
Now,let's watch this anime.
After watching this anime, I have mixed feelings now. This anime has magical power, it can make me laugh and cry at the same time.Overall, I think this is a very good anime. But please remember, you should watch it during your winter holiday, as we have to prepare for our final exam now.
如果满意请尽快采纳~
再问：
还有这部分，真的十分感谢
再答： 好的，以下格式为 原词（句）：替换词（句）
全文以过去时为主。
tease: make fun of
let him: gave him the task to will: would
Charlie句: Charlie went to FS' home on a weekend as part-time job with his worries
lost: had lost
run out of: make full use of
Since then句: a special emotional connection was created between them-- they are like a kind father and his son.
Today,I want to introduce a Japanese anime(日漫). I am afraid our English teacher will be angry, so I want you just to choose the speech I will talk about. SCENT OFA WOMAN OR ANGEL BEATS.
ANGELBEATS:
This anime shows the world after death. Everyone who comes to this world dies with regret. If they want to continue living in this world after their death, they must fight with the enemy whose name is angel. If they have cleared up their regret in their lives, they will disappear in this after-death world. It may sound ridiculous. But in fact, if they stay in this world, it means that they still have something to regret, and if they could die without regret, then they must disappear.
There is an amazing thing. As this anime is about the world after death, people in it will restore to their original state after a while, no matter how serious they are hurt, even though they have been cut into pieces.That means they will never die.
Now,let's watch this anime.
After watching this anime, I have mixed feelings now. This anime has magical power, it can make me laugh and cry at the same time.Overall, I think this is a very good anime. But please remember, you should watch it during your winter holiday, as we have to prepare for our final exam now.
如果满意请尽快采纳~
再问：
还有这部分，真的十分感谢再答： 好的，以下格式为 原词（句）：替换词（句）
全文以过去时为主。
tease: make fun of
let him: gave him the task to will: would
Charlie句: Charlie went to FS' home on a weekend as part-time job with his worries
lost: had lost
run out of: make full use of
Since then句: a special emotional connection was created between them-- they are like a kind father and his son.