百度作业网能帮我该下这篇英文作文吗?
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能帮我该下这篇英文作文吗?
It is a romantic and technological story.
In front of a splendid building stands a young man wearing the dustman’s clothes.His vague face seems as if he is a man of dignity.It is the ninth day for him to enter this buster and pick up the cleaner as a ordinary dustman.He is not a professional sweeper but a part-time college kids.
What he should do everyday is not merely scrubbing the floors of all rooms but tidying up all the labs in the third floor.
It has become a platitude that he would have the enough opportunities to see innumerable kinds of life-forms,which are probably from Africa’s grass or deep sea in Indian Ocean,for that this grand construction is outstanding institute for biology in this country.
It is not yet clear that why he chose this boring work as the source of pocket money.In all likelihood,he has no other choice for having no enough knowledge,apart from selling his only labor force.
Scene1(The hall of biology institute)
“Jerry,Don’t always pour away the unnamed solution to the water closet,please!” according to the chief director of rear-service department,“maybe these wired old boy would invent a worldshaking toy using it,it is already the ninth time for me to receive the complain after your entering this big house!”
“ok,I had already carried in mind” said Jerry impatiently,this pity young man.
“Yes,I know,you’re a smart boy,wise guy,it is already the ninth time that I heard this blamed words as well” said Robin,the chief director of rear-service apartment.
“Yes?maybe,umm… I always remembered the first half of your words”
It is a romantic and technological story.
In front of a splendid building stands a young man wearing the dustman’s clothes.His vague face seems as if he is a man of dignity.It is the ninth day for him to enter this buster and pick up the cleaner as a ordinary dustman.He is not a professional sweeper but a part-time college kids.
What he should do everyday is not merely scrubbing the floors of all rooms but tidying up all the labs in the third floor.
It has become a platitude that he would have the enough opportunities to see innumerable kinds of life-forms,which are probably from Africa’s grass or deep sea in Indian Ocean,for that this grand construction is outstanding institute for biology in this country.
It is not yet clear that why he chose this boring work as the source of pocket money.In all likelihood,he has no other choice for having no enough knowledge,apart from selling his only labor force.
Scene1(The hall of biology institute)
“Jerry,Don’t always pour away the unnamed solution to the water closet,please!” according to the chief director of rear-service department,“maybe these wired old boy would invent a worldshaking toy using it,it is already the ninth time for me to receive the complain after your entering this big house!”
“ok,I had already carried in mind” said Jerry impatiently,this pity young man.
“Yes,I know,you’re a smart boy,wise guy,it is already the ninth time that I heard this blamed words as well” said Robin,the chief director of rear-service apartment.
“Yes?maybe,umm… I always remembered the first half of your words”
It is a romantic and technological story.(i don't get the technological part,doesn't make any sense)
In front of a splendid building stands a young man wearing the janitor's uniform (you don't say the dustman,doesn't make any sense).His vague face (vague face?what are you trying to say here?) shows that he is a man of dignity.It is the ninth day for him to enter this buster and pick up the cleaner as a ordinary dustman (janitor,again,there is no such thing as a dustman).He is not a professional sweeper but a part-time college kids (use student,kid is informal).
What he should do everyday is not merely scrubbing the floors of all rooms but tidying up all the labs (you mean tidying up the equipment in the lab?) in (on the thrid floor) the third floor.
It has become (became,watch your tenses) a platitude (platitude is not the right word here) that he would have the enough opportunities to see innumerable (many,innumerable is not appropriate)kinds of life-forms,which are (were,you should be using the past tense here)probably from Africa’s grass or deep sea in Indian Ocean,for that this grand construction is outstanding institute for biology in this country.
It is not yet clear that why he chose this boring (mundane instead of boring,you don't describe a career as BORING)work as the source of pocket money (income,not pocket money).In all likelihood,he has no other choice for having no enough knowledge,apart from selling his only labor force (this last part doesn't make any sense).
Scene1(The hall of biology institute)
“Jerry,Don’t always pour away the unnamed (use unknown) solution to the water closet(drain,or washroom or toilet,not water closet,no one uses this anymore),please!” according to the chief director of rear-service department,“maybe these wired (wired old boy?) old boy would invent a worldshaking toy using it,it is already the ninth time for me to receive the complain after your entering this big house!”
“ok,I had already carried in mind” said Jerry impatiently,this pity young man (doesn't make sense).
“Yes,I know,you’re a smart boy,wise guy,it is already the ninth time that I heard this blamed words as well” said Robin,the chief director of rear-service apartment.
“Yes?maybe,umm… I always remembered the first half of your words”
i sort of get what you are trying to say here.But a lot of your choices of words and the way you organize you sentences doesn't make any sense.There is a problem with your writing,comma splice,you are separating full sentences with commas,wrong!
there are way to many problems with your writing therefore you need to make some big changes.
In front of a splendid building stands a young man wearing the janitor's uniform (you don't say the dustman,doesn't make any sense).His vague face (vague face?what are you trying to say here?) shows that he is a man of dignity.It is the ninth day for him to enter this buster and pick up the cleaner as a ordinary dustman (janitor,again,there is no such thing as a dustman).He is not a professional sweeper but a part-time college kids (use student,kid is informal).
What he should do everyday is not merely scrubbing the floors of all rooms but tidying up all the labs (you mean tidying up the equipment in the lab?) in (on the thrid floor) the third floor.
It has become (became,watch your tenses) a platitude (platitude is not the right word here) that he would have the enough opportunities to see innumerable (many,innumerable is not appropriate)kinds of life-forms,which are (were,you should be using the past tense here)probably from Africa’s grass or deep sea in Indian Ocean,for that this grand construction is outstanding institute for biology in this country.
It is not yet clear that why he chose this boring (mundane instead of boring,you don't describe a career as BORING)work as the source of pocket money (income,not pocket money).In all likelihood,he has no other choice for having no enough knowledge,apart from selling his only labor force (this last part doesn't make any sense).
Scene1(The hall of biology institute)
“Jerry,Don’t always pour away the unnamed (use unknown) solution to the water closet(drain,or washroom or toilet,not water closet,no one uses this anymore),please!” according to the chief director of rear-service department,“maybe these wired (wired old boy?) old boy would invent a worldshaking toy using it,it is already the ninth time for me to receive the complain after your entering this big house!”
“ok,I had already carried in mind” said Jerry impatiently,this pity young man (doesn't make sense).
“Yes,I know,you’re a smart boy,wise guy,it is already the ninth time that I heard this blamed words as well” said Robin,the chief director of rear-service apartment.
“Yes?maybe,umm… I always remembered the first half of your words”
i sort of get what you are trying to say here.But a lot of your choices of words and the way you organize you sentences doesn't make any sense.There is a problem with your writing,comma splice,you are separating full sentences with commas,wrong!
there are way to many problems with your writing therefore you need to make some big changes.