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请大家帮我修改下我的回信,看哪里有问题
Thank you very much for your letter with so sinere greetings and blessings.
I must apology for not writing to you immediately,（这里想说,是因为两个月前还没有经常查看邮件的习惯.） because until two months ago I hadn't developed a habit of regular checking my e-mail and I also had not enough confidence for my written English.（JOY也是最近才建起的邮箱,所以我把你的信转发给了她）Joy recently has registered an e-mail address,so I transmit your letter to her.She was so happy that would write back to you soon later（她看了很高兴,准备不久后给你们回信）.I hope you could come to China again,if you want to take a tour in Inner Mongolia,I will have a pleasure to be your guide（这句主要看下语态对不对）.
At last,I will appreciate again for your precious gift,Holy Bible in English（英文版的圣经这样说对不对）,and the Bible verse（来信富含圣经诗句,我这里想表达圣经诗句这个意思,you shared to me in your letter.Attached are some pictures taken in traveling to Beijing Forestry University last October when I was exciting in the aboundance of those natural vegetation（我去北京林业大学逛的时候,看到丰富的植被种类很兴奋.）.）
好久不写英文的东西,都不会写信了.请帮忙检查下,语句是否通顺.
Thank you very much for your letter with so sinere greetings and blessings.
I must apology for not writing to you immediately,（这里想说,是因为两个月前还没有经常查看邮件的习惯.） because until two months ago I hadn't developed a habit of regular checking my e-mail and I also had not enough confidence for my written English.（JOY也是最近才建起的邮箱,所以我把你的信转发给了她）Joy recently has registered an e-mail address,so I transmit your letter to her.She was so happy that would write back to you soon later（她看了很高兴,准备不久后给你们回信）.I hope you could come to China again,if you want to take a tour in Inner Mongolia,I will have a pleasure to be your guide（这句主要看下语态对不对）.
At last,I will appreciate again for your precious gift,Holy Bible in English（英文版的圣经这样说对不对）,and the Bible verse（来信富含圣经诗句,我这里想表达圣经诗句这个意思,you shared to me in your letter.Attached are some pictures taken in traveling to Beijing Forestry University last October when I was exciting in the aboundance of those natural vegetation（我去北京林业大学逛的时候,看到丰富的植被种类很兴奋.）.）
好久不写英文的东西,都不会写信了.请帮忙检查下,语句是否通顺.
Thank you very much for your letter with sincere greetings and blessings. I must apology for not writing to you as soon as you sent me letter because I didn't have the habit of checking my e-mail everyday until two months ago and I also have no enough confidence of my English.Joy has registered an e-mail address recently, so I transmit your letter to her inbox. She was so happy that she can write back to you soon. I hope you could come to China again, if you wish to take a tour in Inner Mongolia, it will be a pleasure if I can be your guide.
Lastly, I wish to appreciate for your precious gift once again, English version of Holy Bible and the Bible verse. Here are some picture attachments which are taken during the travel to Beijing Forestry University last October, I was very exciting when I saw the abundant of natural plants.
Lastly, I wish to appreciate for your precious gift once again, English version of Holy Bible and the Bible verse. Here are some picture attachments which are taken during the travel to Beijing Forestry University last October, I was very exciting when I saw the abundant of natural plants.