英语求救!谁可以帮忙修改一下这篇文章!
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英语求救!谁可以帮忙修改一下这篇文章!
Report:Lina’s defeated by her Russsia opponent
Chinese tennis player,Lina,lost the game on Oct.7.The game lasted 58 minutes,and the result is here:6-2,6-0.To everyone’s surprise,Lina was totally defeated by her opponent.
‘I f it were not taday,this competition season could be a nice one,’said Lina soon after the competition.
In the whole competition,Lina is not in the condition.She said,’In fact,I know her(Lina’s Russian opponent)advantanges and disadvantagesmbut I just can’t focus myself to do what the coach had told me.Maybe today is not a good day for me to play.’
After the contest,Lina’s competition season is also to an end.And now only national sports is left waiting for her.
‘After the National Sports Meeting,I’ll take a holiday.And during the holiday,I will not touch my rackets or think ahout my training.And I’ll go on my training either in America or in German after the holiday.’
Anyhow,in the past several weeks,her achievements are seen by all fo us.
Report:Lina’s defeated by her Russsia opponent
Chinese tennis player,Lina,lost the game on Oct.7.The game lasted 58 minutes,and the result is here:6-2,6-0.To everyone’s surprise,Lina was totally defeated by her opponent.
‘I f it were not taday,this competition season could be a nice one,’said Lina soon after the competition.
In the whole competition,Lina is not in the condition.She said,’In fact,I know her(Lina’s Russian opponent)advantanges and disadvantagesmbut I just can’t focus myself to do what the coach had told me.Maybe today is not a good day for me to play.’
After the contest,Lina’s competition season is also to an end.And now only national sports is left waiting for her.
‘After the National Sports Meeting,I’ll take a holiday.And during the holiday,I will not touch my rackets or think ahout my training.And I’ll go on my training either in America or in German after the holiday.’
Anyhow,in the past several weeks,her achievements are seen by all fo us.
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Report:Lina’s defeated by her Russsia opponent
报道:李娜被俄罗斯对手击败
Chinese tennis player,Lina,lost the game on Oct. 7.The game lasted 58 minutes,and the result is here:6-2,6-0.To everyone’s surprise,Lina was totally defeated by her opponent.
中国网球手李娜,在10月7日输掉了这场比赛.比赛历时58分钟,比分为6-2,6-0.令人吃惊的是,李娜竟然输的如此彻底.
‘I f it were not taday,this competition season could be a nice one,’said Lina soon after the competition.
“如果不是今天输了的话,整个赛季对我来说会是个不错的赛季.”李娜在比赛刚刚结束后说道.
In the whole competition,Lina is not in the condition.She said,’In fact,I know her(Lina’s Russian opponent)advantanges and disadvantagesmbut I just can’t focus myself to do what the coach had told me.Maybe today is not a good day for me to play.’
在整个比赛过程中,李娜都不在状态.她说,“事实上,我了解她(李娜的对手)的优势与劣势,但是我就是没办法集中精力按照教练的布置去打比赛.也许今天这个日子不适合我比赛.
After the contest,Lina’s competition season is also to an end.And now only national sports is left waiting for her.
‘After the National Sports Meeting,I’ll take a holiday.And during the holiday,I will not touch my rackets or think ahout my training. And I’ll go on my training either in America or in German after the holiday.’
赛后,李娜的这个赛季也就划上了句号.接下来她等待她的也就只在全运会了.“全运会后我会休个假.假期期间我不会再动我的球拍,也不会再想着我的训练.假期之后,我要么会在美国训练,要么会在德国训练.”
Anyhow,in the past several weeks,her achievements are seen by all of us.
不管怎么说,在过去的几周时间里,李娜的成绩是我们每个人都亲眼目睹的.
精心手译哦!楼主细心验收啊!
以下是修改:
Report:Lina’s defeated by her Russsia opponent
写成: Lina Defeated by Her Russian Opponent
标题就不用写is了,实词要首字母大写,Russia要用形容词.
Chinese tennis player Lina, lost the game on Oct. 7.The game only lasted 58 minutes with a result of 6-2,6-0. Such a complete defeat surprised everyone.
‘If it were not for today, this competition season could be a nice one,’said Lina soon after the competition.
Through the game,Lina was not in good form. She said,’In fact,I know very well both of her(Lina’s Russian opponent)advantanges and disadvantages. But I just couldn't focus myself to do what the coach had told me to.Maybe today is not a good day for me to play.’
After the contest, Lina's series also come to an end with only the National Games waiting for her.
‘After the National Games,I’ll take a holiday. And during the holiday,I will neither touch my rackets nor think ahout my training. And I’ll go on my training either in America or in German after the holiday.’
Anyhow,in the past several weeks,her achievements have been seen by all of us.
好啦,改好啦. 网球的赛季在英语里面应该叫系列赛,也就是series,如法网是一个series,温网也是一个series.
报道:李娜被俄罗斯对手击败
Chinese tennis player,Lina,lost the game on Oct. 7.The game lasted 58 minutes,and the result is here:6-2,6-0.To everyone’s surprise,Lina was totally defeated by her opponent.
中国网球手李娜,在10月7日输掉了这场比赛.比赛历时58分钟,比分为6-2,6-0.令人吃惊的是,李娜竟然输的如此彻底.
‘I f it were not taday,this competition season could be a nice one,’said Lina soon after the competition.
“如果不是今天输了的话,整个赛季对我来说会是个不错的赛季.”李娜在比赛刚刚结束后说道.
In the whole competition,Lina is not in the condition.She said,’In fact,I know her(Lina’s Russian opponent)advantanges and disadvantagesmbut I just can’t focus myself to do what the coach had told me.Maybe today is not a good day for me to play.’
在整个比赛过程中,李娜都不在状态.她说,“事实上,我了解她(李娜的对手)的优势与劣势,但是我就是没办法集中精力按照教练的布置去打比赛.也许今天这个日子不适合我比赛.
After the contest,Lina’s competition season is also to an end.And now only national sports is left waiting for her.
‘After the National Sports Meeting,I’ll take a holiday.And during the holiday,I will not touch my rackets or think ahout my training. And I’ll go on my training either in America or in German after the holiday.’
赛后,李娜的这个赛季也就划上了句号.接下来她等待她的也就只在全运会了.“全运会后我会休个假.假期期间我不会再动我的球拍,也不会再想着我的训练.假期之后,我要么会在美国训练,要么会在德国训练.”
Anyhow,in the past several weeks,her achievements are seen by all of us.
不管怎么说,在过去的几周时间里,李娜的成绩是我们每个人都亲眼目睹的.
精心手译哦!楼主细心验收啊!
以下是修改:
Report:Lina’s defeated by her Russsia opponent
写成: Lina Defeated by Her Russian Opponent
标题就不用写is了,实词要首字母大写,Russia要用形容词.
Chinese tennis player Lina, lost the game on Oct. 7.The game only lasted 58 minutes with a result of 6-2,6-0. Such a complete defeat surprised everyone.
‘If it were not for today, this competition season could be a nice one,’said Lina soon after the competition.
Through the game,Lina was not in good form. She said,’In fact,I know very well both of her(Lina’s Russian opponent)advantanges and disadvantages. But I just couldn't focus myself to do what the coach had told me to.Maybe today is not a good day for me to play.’
After the contest, Lina's series also come to an end with only the National Games waiting for her.
‘After the National Games,I’ll take a holiday. And during the holiday,I will neither touch my rackets nor think ahout my training. And I’ll go on my training either in America or in German after the holiday.’
Anyhow,in the past several weeks,her achievements have been seen by all of us.
好啦,改好啦. 网球的赛季在英语里面应该叫系列赛,也就是series,如法网是一个series,温网也是一个series.