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这是我的日记,June 13 Monday sunnyI'm the victim of a false alarm.I

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这是我的日记,
June 13 Monday sunny
I'm the victim of a false alarm.I have feeled scared till now.
I went out of home to bought some food in supermarket in this evening.I arrived at supermarket and then I went back to home.After I had arrived home I played computer games.I couldn't find my key after I had finished computer game and want
June 13 Monday 's sunnyI'm victim of a of of alarm.I of false feeled of have till of scared went of now.I Me bought of to food of some supermarket of in this of in arrived of evening.I supermarket of at then of and I K home.After of to my had home of arrived I computer of played couldn't of games.I my of find after of key Shed game of computer want of and away.I asked them where my key is.But they said they didn't know.I was very anxious when I heared the word.My parents and I found my key but we found nothing again.I felt really sad.Fortunated,My Mum found it in my pants pocket.
这是我的日记,June 13 Monday sunnyI'm the victim of a false alarm.I
Line3 home is an adverb(副词),前面不加介词of
Line3 ……to do,bought改为buy
Line3 in this evening中,去掉in in supermarket要冠词
Line4 home is an adverb(副词),前面不加介词to
After I had arrived home after I had finished had最好去掉