百度作业网谁帮我看看语句通不通顺
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谁帮我看看语句通不通顺
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,I am 13 years old.I don't have English name.My house includes the 4 people person,they are my father,mother,younger brother with me.I love them.I like to play with my younger brother together,he is lovely.My ideal will be to become a painter,I like to paint.并把意思写在下面~（自己写的）
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,I am 13 years old.I don't have English name.My house includes the 4 people person,they are my father,mother,younger brother with me.I love them.I like to play with my younger brother together,he is lovely.My ideal will be to become a painter,I like to paint.并把意思写在下面~（自己写的）
English name前面应加个an；
My house includes the 4 people person这句不能用the,people和person重复；改为There are 4 persons in my family 比较好；
they are my father,mother,younger brother with me.with改成and;
idel是个形容词,应该用dream,My dream is to become a painter.I like paniting.
给你改写一下吧,
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13 years old.我的中文名叫刘玉坤,我没有英文名.今年13岁.
There are 4 persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.I love my family.I like playing with my younger brother,who is lovely.
我的家庭有四个成员,我的父亲、母亲、弟弟还有我.我爱我的家人.我喜欢和我弟弟一起玩耍,他很可爱.
I like painting,my dream is to become a painter（becoming a painter).
我喜欢绘画,我的梦想是成为一名画家.
My house includes the 4 people person这句不能用the,people和person重复；改为There are 4 persons in my family 比较好；
they are my father,mother,younger brother with me.with改成and;
idel是个形容词,应该用dream,My dream is to become a painter.I like paniting.
给你改写一下吧,
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13 years old.我的中文名叫刘玉坤,我没有英文名.今年13岁.
There are 4 persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.I love my family.I like playing with my younger brother,who is lovely.
我的家庭有四个成员,我的父亲、母亲、弟弟还有我.我爱我的家人.我喜欢和我弟弟一起玩耍,他很可爱.
I like painting,my dream is to become a painter（becoming a painter).
我喜欢绘画,我的梦想是成为一名画家.