百度作业网一篇假如给我三天光明读后感，麻烦学霸找错误（英语不好的就无视我吧！）I was very excited when I
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一篇假如给我三天光明读后感，麻烦学霸找错误（英语不好的就无视我吧！）I was very excited when I was reading three days to see.
Helen Adams Keller is unlucy and I thin she is poor.When she was a baby she fell ill,that made her blind and deaf.Although,she was very strong and activity.She believed herself and she was very successful when she grew up.
I admire(敬佩） she so much. And I believe myself that I will study hard and make good grades. So my parents will be proud of my behaviour.I will treasure(珍惜） my health and I will take exercise everyday.
Helen Adams Keller is unlucy and I thin she is poor.When she was a baby she fell ill,that made her blind and deaf.Although,she was very strong and activity.She believed herself and she was very successful when she grew up.
I admire(敬佩） she so much. And I believe myself that I will study hard and make good grades. So my parents will be proud of my behaviour.I will treasure(珍惜） my health and I will take exercise everyday.
不要用when用while
再问： 为啥
再问： 噢 我懂了 when后面接过去时
再答： ，when i was reading ,when后面一般是短暂性动词
再答： 就这个when改正一下就可以了
再问： 还有吧
再答： 这是你写的，我觉得语句都不通顺
再答： 。。
再答： 把手稿拿出来
再问： 我在百度上找的 我也觉得一大把错
再答： 是啊
再答： 你自己再写一遍
再答： 我看看吧
再问： So my parents will be proud of my behaviour
再问： 这句话肿么翻译
再问： 为啥
再问： 噢 我懂了 when后面接过去时
再答： ，when i was reading ,when后面一般是短暂性动词
再答： 就这个when改正一下就可以了
再问： 还有吧
再答： 这是你写的，我觉得语句都不通顺
再答： 。。
再答： 把手稿拿出来
再问： 我在百度上找的 我也觉得一大把错
再答： 是啊
再答： 你自己再写一遍
再答： 我看看吧
再问： So my parents will be proud of my behaviour
再问： 这句话肿么翻译