百度作业网高中英语作文求挑错,求改正,谢谢!（150字左右的）
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高中英语作文求挑错,求改正,谢谢!（150字左右的）
题目：目前你学校正在进行素质教育,双休日不允许老师统一组织学生上课和考试,但是可以开展丰富有益的课外活动.请写一篇短文,谈谈你对这件事的看法.
Nowadays, our school is trying the quality-oriented education aiming at making us students more well-rounded.Our school don't allow teachers to organize something embracing students' testing and having classes together at weekends.Meanwhile ,students are encouraged to join in meaningful activities to open their eyesight.I think this issue has a array of tremendous positive effects on students.
What comes first is that students will have more chances to learn what they can't learn at school.Quality-oriented education not practiced,seldom can students be likely to broaden their horizon.Futhermore,students may have less pressure on studying and they will study better.Last but not least,through all of the out-class activities,students can cultivate their own interests,and this advantages is of vital significance.
As far as I'm concerned,we students really benefit a lot from quality-oriented education,and it is high time that all the school practiced this new method of education.
最后一行schools把s漏了
题目：目前你学校正在进行素质教育,双休日不允许老师统一组织学生上课和考试,但是可以开展丰富有益的课外活动.请写一篇短文,谈谈你对这件事的看法.
Nowadays, our school is trying the quality-oriented education aiming at making us students more well-rounded.Our school don't allow teachers to organize something embracing students' testing and having classes together at weekends.Meanwhile ,students are encouraged to join in meaningful activities to open their eyesight.I think this issue has a array of tremendous positive effects on students.
What comes first is that students will have more chances to learn what they can't learn at school.Quality-oriented education not practiced,seldom can students be likely to broaden their horizon.Futhermore,students may have less pressure on studying and they will study better.Last but not least,through all of the out-class activities,students can cultivate their own interests,and this advantages is of vital significance.
As far as I'm concerned,we students really benefit a lot from quality-oriented education,and it is high time that all the school practiced this new method of education.
最后一行schools把s漏了
don't改为doesn't, something改为anything, having改为have ,a改为an, effects改为effect
这句话改一下：Had quality-oriented education not been practised,seldom could students ...
advantages改为advantage, I'm改为I've
再问： having改成have了和题目给的原句句意不符。若是having的话语法上有什么样的错误？还有，书上写的是I'm concerned，I've concerned也可以吗？
再答： Our school doesn't allow teachers to have classes together, have是动词不定式后的动词。 也可以吧 As far as后用完成时。
这句话改一下：Had quality-oriented education not been practised,seldom could students ...
advantages改为advantage, I'm改为I've
再问： having改成have了和题目给的原句句意不符。若是having的话语法上有什么样的错误？还有，书上写的是I'm concerned，I've concerned也可以吗？
再答： Our school doesn't allow teachers to have classes together, have是动词不定式后的动词。 也可以吧 As far as后用完成时。