百度作业网英语作文，满分15，请老师批改
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期末了，和同学要分开了，班里开了一次party，每个人都上台去发言，请你准备一个发言稿，不少于60字。 Today,everybody had to say goodbye.We have lived together for 3 years.So I’m very sad.We help each other in 3years,I get on well with Tom and Zhi,they are my best friend.Tom is very kind and friendly,Zhi is very friend,too.He often help me to study English.After all,all good things must come to an end(天下没有不散的宴席).I think a friend in need is a griend indeed.But it’s a pity that we will say goodbye,I can forever remember you
解题思路： live表示长时间的定居，应改为stay。 在某学科帮助某人比较地道的英语应是help one with one's English/math等。
解题过程：
Hello, everyone. We have to say goodbye to each other today. So I’m very sad. We have stayed together for 3 years. We helped each other during the 3 years. I get on well with Tom and Zhi, they are my best friends.Tom is very kind and friendly, Zhi is very friendly,too. He often helps me with my English. After all, all good things must come to an end(天下没有不散的宴席).I think a friend in need is a griend indeed. But it’s a pity that we will say goodbye,I will remember you forever.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Hello, everyone. We have to say goodbye to each other today. So I’m very sad. We have stayed together for 3 years. We helped each other during the 3 years. I get on well with Tom and Zhi, they are my best friends.Tom is very kind and friendly, Zhi is very friendly,too. He often helps me with my English. After all, all good things must come to an end(天下没有不散的宴席).I think a friend in need is a griend indeed. But it’s a pity that we will say goodbye,I will remember you forever.
最终答案：略