我写了一首英文歌,请帮我看下,找下有没有错?
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我写了一首英文歌,请帮我看下,找下有没有错?
歌词:
what have i got to do to make you love me what have i got to do to make you care
what can i do when lightning strikes me
what do i do to make you want me
what have i go to do to be heard
what do i say when it's all over
it's sad so sad
it's a sad ,sad situation
And it's getting more and more absurd
it's sad,so sad
why can't we talk it over
(iepeat the second part)
Over!
歌词:
what have i got to do to make you love me what have i got to do to make you care
what can i do when lightning strikes me
what do i do to make you want me
what have i go to do to be heard
what do i say when it's all over
it's sad so sad
it's a sad ,sad situation
And it's getting more and more absurd
it's sad,so sad
why can't we talk it over
(iepeat the second part)
Over!
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what do i do to make you want me => what should i do to make you want me .
why can't we talk it over =>why can't we talk it again.
what do i say when it's all over =>what should i say when it's all ove
why can't we talk it over =>why can't we talk it again.
what do i say when it's all over =>what should i say when it's all ove