百度作业网帮我改下初中英语作文I don't want to grow upi'm 15 years old now,I look
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帮我改下初中英语作文
I don't want to grow up
i'm 15 years old now,I look like other students ,so busy,I have too homework to do
and don't have enough time to play with friends .
one day ,I dream abrout my kid's time
in a park,I play with my friends ,we all enjoy it
we haven't any homework ,and needn't study all day
later,I back home ,panrents don't to criticize me .and I hvae many time to enjoy the
lunch ,and i can watch cartoonsat home ,it's so funny .
evening ,i can go to bed after 10 o'clock
the next day ,i can get up at noon.and i can see sky ,ican see sea.
i go to amusement park ,i only need to pay for half-price ticket and even need't pay for any thing
so,i can enjoy any amusement park.it's so happy and fun
just now ,my alarm clock is ring ,oh ,it's just a dream .
next ,i have a quick breakfast ,it's 7 o'clock .I was always late for school,today.too
next,i go to teacher's office ,it's too bad .
then,i start to siwm at the sea of books ,i don't want to grow up
god ,please help me ,help me
I don't want to grow up
i'm 15 years old now,I look like other students ,so busy,I have too homework to do
and don't have enough time to play with friends .
one day ,I dream abrout my kid's time
in a park,I play with my friends ,we all enjoy it
we haven't any homework ,and needn't study all day
later,I back home ,panrents don't to criticize me .and I hvae many time to enjoy the
lunch ,and i can watch cartoonsat home ,it's so funny .
evening ,i can go to bed after 10 o'clock
the next day ,i can get up at noon.and i can see sky ,ican see sea.
i go to amusement park ,i only need to pay for half-price ticket and even need't pay for any thing
so,i can enjoy any amusement park.it's so happy and fun
just now ,my alarm clock is ring ,oh ,it's just a dream .
next ,i have a quick breakfast ,it's 7 o'clock .I was always late for school,today.too
next,i go to teacher's office ,it's too bad .
then,i start to siwm at the sea of books ,i don't want to grow up
god ,please help me ,help me
第二行“,so busy,I have too homework to do and don't have enough time to play with friends ”我认为改为“I have too homework to doand don't have enough time to play with friends ,it's so busy."比较好.
第四行"one day"改为"today" "make a dream";“abrout”什么意思,你打错了吧!是”about"
第六行"haven't"改为“don't have","needn't study "改为"needn't to study"
第七行” later,I back home ”改为“at last,I go back home."
第八行”cartoonsat"没这个单词
第九行,"evening"改为"in the evening"
第十行“see the shy","sea the sea"
第十一行” need't pay "改为"needn't to pay"
十三行“is ringing"
从第四行到第十二行所有的"can"都去掉!
第四行"one day"改为"today" "make a dream";“abrout”什么意思,你打错了吧!是”about"
第六行"haven't"改为“don't have","needn't study "改为"needn't to study"
第七行” later,I back home ”改为“at last,I go back home."
第八行”cartoonsat"没这个单词
第九行,"evening"改为"in the evening"
第十行“see the shy","sea the sea"
第十一行” need't pay "改为"needn't to pay"
十三行“is ringing"
从第四行到第十二行所有的"can"都去掉!
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