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英语好的朋友 麻烦帮我修改一下这篇小作文吧
Different people have different hobbies,and my hobby is reading books.because i think it’s a good way to get knowledge.
i often read books in my free time.i feel just like get into a wonderful world when i read books,it makes me excited and happy.so i am used to writing my thoughts and feelings on my books.And if i go somewhere,i will never forget to bring my books with me.
Books are not only our best friends but also our best teachers.
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英语好的朋友 麻烦帮我修改一下这篇小作文吧
Different people have different hobbies,and my hobby is reading books.because I think it’s a good way to acquire knowledge.
I often read books in my free time. i feel just like getting into a wonderful world when i read books,it makes me excited and happy.so i am used to writing my thoughts and feelings on my books.And if i go somewhere, i will never forget to bring my books with me.
Books are not only our best friends but also our best teachers.
最后一句总结写的很好,但是上面的内容不太有关,可以根据这句话来写,写两方面,书像朋友的一面,像老师的一面
再问: 没办法啊 老师要求第一段那么写 第二段写平时的做法 我自己看着也别扭
再答: 把最后一段去掉会好点,有字数要求吗
再问: 没有啊 可老师要最后总结 我很无奈
再答: I believe book is one of my best friends all in my life.怎么样