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满分20.请老师在原来的基础上修改,修改的句子容易提分又容易记。谢谢

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满分20.请老师在原来的基础上修改,修改的句子容易提分又容易记。谢谢
满分20.请老师在原来的基础上修改,修改的句子容易提分又容易记。谢谢
解题思路: 写作时注意不要出现单词拼写以及大的语法错误。注意尽量使用一些句型和高级词汇。
解题过程:
Dear,Jenny,
I 'm very sad to hear that you will finish your exachage student life and go back to England soon.
During the time which we spend together,I come to know how wonderful a girl you are.You are kind and
friendly to all the people in your life.I think we have a wonderful time together.don't we? I still remember the first
time when we climbed the mountain Tai.And I still remember you help me learn English.With your help,I have made great
progress in English.
I really hope you can come to China again.Then we can stay together and I will show you aroud Bei jing.
Best wishes.
yours
LIJin