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题如下Born in bonn,German,Beethoven showed musical talent at an

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题如下
Born in bonn,German,Beethoven showed musical talent at an early age.He learned to play violin and piano from his father,who was a singer.Beethoven met Hayden in 1971,but was not impressing bythe older man.Having been known each other for many years,Beethoven said,"He is a good composer,and I have learnt nothing from him."However,that was Hayden who encouraged Beethoven to move to Vienna.
Beethoven became very popular for his audience in the Austrian capital,there he stayed for the rest of his life.As grew older,he began to go deaf.He becomes completely deaf during the last years of her life,but he continued composing.
共有十个错误
题如下Born in bonn,German,Beethoven showed musical talent at an
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童鞋,你在打字的时候可能有大小写字母,标点符号等的错误,这样就影响了我的判断,居然找出了11个错误.你重点检查一下 capital后面是否逗号,如果是逗号,there需要改为where.还有 play the violin 乐器前要加the.