百度作业网请问这篇短文估计能得多少分?
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请问这篇短文估计能得多少分?
明天检查，请大家预估一下能得多少分（满分15分）谢谢
i think ones shouldn't make himself a big desire，if you didn't，you won't be able to get your aim，because it is too difficult to be get your aim。so i think ones should make himself step by step to make everything，instead of the man in the picture，who had a big desire，which led he to get a big disappoint
明天检查，请大家预估一下能得多少分（满分15分）谢谢
i think ones shouldn't make himself a big desire，if you didn't，you won't be able to get your aim，because it is too difficult to be get your aim。so i think ones should make himself step by step to make everything，instead of the man in the picture，who had a big desire，which led he to get a big disappoint
除了你的语法错误比如虚拟语气,条件状语从句,定语从句都有错误,说明底子不扎实.还有短语错误搭配.比如Make himself a big desire,想表达拜金的话可以说money worship.get your aim 英语中不这么表达,正确搭配是achieve aim.make everything也很别扭.你的语言有很多的中式英语,平时应多积累英语短语和习惯搭配.还有啊,你标点符号严重错误,逗号句号分不清.得分应该在6,7分左右