百度作业网帮我改一下这篇初中英语文章（明天早上截止）
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帮我改一下这篇初中英语文章（明天早上截止）
就是一篇期末总结,英语有点烂,改的好一点,多一点.
During this time,I have learnt a lot.(主要是想表达 在这段时间里我学到很多 的意思,..)Actually,everything is unforgettable.Especially the conscientious of Rumbert,the humor of Bradon,the friendly of Fatima.I have learnt a lot from the daily talk in Fatima's lesson.Not only the knowledge but also some philosophy.I really want to say thank you to Balinge.
就是一篇期末总结,英语有点烂,改的好一点,多一点.
During this time,I have learnt a lot.(主要是想表达 在这段时间里我学到很多 的意思,..)Actually,everything is unforgettable.Especially the conscientious of Rumbert,the humor of Bradon,the friendly of Fatima.I have learnt a lot from the daily talk in Fatima's lesson.Not only the knowledge but also some philosophy.I really want to say thank you to Balinge.
帮你修改如下:
During this period, I have learnt a lot.
Actually, everything is unforgettable, especially Rumbert's conscientiousness, Bradon's sense of humor, Fatima's kindness. I have learnt a lot from the daily talk of Fatima's lesson. Not only the knowledge itself but also some important philosophic theories. I really want to say---thanks a million, Mr Balinge.
简要说明,表达某某人的尽责,应该用名词形式,所以帮你改过来了.因为你想夸的其实是Bradon的幽默感,所以帮你改成了sense of humor,形容某某人亲切友好一般用kindness.哲理是philosophic theory, philosophy一般是指哲学.后面是一些形式上的小变化,希望你喜欢.
During this period, I have learnt a lot.
Actually, everything is unforgettable, especially Rumbert's conscientiousness, Bradon's sense of humor, Fatima's kindness. I have learnt a lot from the daily talk of Fatima's lesson. Not only the knowledge itself but also some important philosophic theories. I really want to say---thanks a million, Mr Balinge.
简要说明,表达某某人的尽责,应该用名词形式,所以帮你改过来了.因为你想夸的其实是Bradon的幽默感,所以帮你改成了sense of humor,形容某某人亲切友好一般用kindness.哲理是philosophic theory, philosophy一般是指哲学.后面是一些形式上的小变化,希望你喜欢.