英语作文求修改!Red List Animals:ThePolar BearThe animals inthis pho

英语作文求修改!
Red List Animals:ThePolar Bear
The animals in
this photo are polar bears or white bears.In fact,a polar bear is a bear.You
can know that from its name---polar bear.Here they are fighting in the ice
land.Maybe they are playing,maybe they are fighting for partners.They are
white because they want to hide themselves on ice.
The polar bear is the biggest carnivore who
live on land.They live in the North Pole.The males’ length are about 240~260
centimeters,and the weight of them is approximately 400~750 kilograms.The
females are half of males.Before winter comes,the polar bears need to eat a
lot of food,so at that time,they will be fatter and fatter---over 1000
kilograms!The polar bears’ can smell and run very well---they can smell a human
30 kilometers away and sometimes run at 60 kilometers an hour.
The polar bear in
this photo is hunting a wolf.Although they look very lovely,they are heartless
hunters.They usually eat seals,especially the ringed seal,they also eat
walruses,whales,seabirds,fish,and small mammals.But they sometimes also
eat carrion.And the polar bear is the only attack human bear.Although the
polar bear eats lots of meat,they also eat vegetables.In summer,they also
eat fruit and see grass.
In a word,the polar bear is a kind of
aggressive animals.Although they look very cute,but you’d better don’t touch
them!They hunt seals and they can run and swim very quickly.
Although the polar bear is very cute and
amazing,they are still becoming extinct because of human actions.First,the
climate is becoming warmer and warmer,so the ice is melting.Polar bears are
losing their home.Second,people are hunting them for fur.We need to do
something to save these lovely bears!Please try not to drive cars and don’t buy
or wear clothes made by animals’ fur!
Heal the world.Make it a better place,for you
and for me and the entire human race.If you care enough for the living,make alittle space,make a better place.

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