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帮我看看这篇英语演讲稿,改正错的地方
Hello everyone.I’m here you tell you about one of my dreams,it was a scary but meaningful story
I got up in a normal morning,put on my special clothes and mask.So that I can breathe safely.I went downstairs and took a glance at the calendar:it was April 22nd,2020.I went into the kitchen,poured my self a cup of coffee.Then I used a cleaning machine to clean some water.And I was ready to go to work.Suddenly,everything became abnormal.The man-made birds in the cages shut their mouths,The wind started to blow hard and the sky went dark.Behind the man-made trees,the clouds scudded frantically across the sky.Every few moment the moon ripped through them,creating wraith-like shadows that raced along the ground.I Sighed,After all these years,the Earth can’t stand us anymore.” .Suddenly,huge waves started to rush to my house,I ran up stairs to the attic bedroom,wrapped myself in an old blanket,with the scary sound of the wave,the wind and people’s scream ,I shook,and then I woke up.
That was just a short nightmare.But it can tell us a lot more than the simple story I told.If we continue to create harmful gases,cut trees,then my dream might be what we are heading towards.If we continue to make the global warming become more and more sirous,then we are putting ourselves and othe creatures in danger.Maybe some day ,there will not be enough room for everybody on the Earth.Peope srart to catch diseases and lose their lives more easily.And maybe one day ,the scene from The Day After Tomorrow will come true.
Or,we can totally start to protect the enviroment.Plant trees,stop burning fossil fuels and create a better world.Then,Perhaps there will be no air pollution in the world.And there will be green everywhere.Perhaps there will be no wars in the world.The world will be very peaceful and quiet.
The futue it never stable,I can only imagine how the world will look like,but the reality is always different.And I hope,some day in the future,in the year of two thousand and twenty,We can have a much better enviroment.We can pour ourselves a cup of coffee and enjoy a whole new bright day.That will be my wish.
Thank you.
帮我看看这篇英语演讲稿,改正错的地方
I’m here you tell you about one of my dreams.
:I’m here to tell you about one of my dreams.
写得不错啊,只有些拼写错误
used a cleaning machine to clean some water.
:used a cleaning machine to clean some clothes.
more and more sirous
:more and more serious
The futue it never stable
:The futue never stable