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my topic is Digtal Camera
Digital camera is a camera takes video and photograph digitally.
recording inmages via an electronic image sensor
compact digital cameras can record sound and moving video as well as still photographs ,Most 21st century cameras are digital.
digital cameras can do things that film cameras cannot.
displaying images on a screen immediatelly after they are recorded.
storing thousands of images on a single small momery device.
recording video with sound, and deleting images to free storage space it even can crop pictures, and play some digital movie.
now I gonna say somethings about DSLR -- the digital single lens reflesx camera .
DSLR are digital Camera Based of SLR . Because , except CCD or flim , they are working with the same way .
when you are useing a SLR or DSLR , you can change the camera lens for what photo graph you want to get .
this makes photograph becomes more interesting and beautiful.
Buy a digital camera , you can never buy film again. and you don't need print every picture , just put em in your PC.
请读者评英文短文我自己搜资料写了篇短文 口语课要考试 请各位朋友帮忙看下有没有语法错误 或者那句话不顺口 帮忙改下 非常
很好. 几个建议:
"Most 21st century cameras are digital." => "Most of the new cameras are now digital."
“now I gonna say somethings about DSLR -- the digital single lens reflesx camera .” =》
"Now I will like to talk about DSLR, or the Digital Single Lense Reflex camera"