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解题思路： next
解题过程：
13分。你写的非常棒。给cathy的建议也很到位。如果再加上几个句子会更好。
在flashcards 之后加上and you learn to use them freely.把have a good eating 改为 have a good lifestyle and have a good balanced diet. 把habits is important for your healthy 改为 a good life habit is important for your healthy.
you can also learn a lot .不是you can also learned a lot.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
13分。你写的非常棒。给cathy的建议也很到位。如果再加上几个句子会更好。
在flashcards 之后加上and you learn to use them freely.把have a good eating 改为 have a good lifestyle and have a good balanced diet. 把habits is important for your healthy 改为 a good life habit is important for your healthy.
you can also learn a lot .不是you can also learned a lot.
最终答案：略