百度作业网帮我改下英语短文错.10处
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帮我改下英语短文错.10处
大小写不用了.There was a king who was very interested in write poems and he thought his poems were perfect .since he was a king,the people to who he showed his poems didn't tell him the truth and sing highly of them.one day a king showed his poems to a learned man who found them poor.this made the king s6 angrily that he sent the man into prison.some time passed and he made his mind to pardoning the man.when the man returned from prison,the king invited him to dinner.again he showed to him his poems and again asked how he thought of them.the learned man turned to the guards who stood by and said,"take him back to prison!"
大小写不用了.There was a king who was very interested in write poems and he thought his poems were perfect .since he was a king,the people to who he showed his poems didn't tell him the truth and sing highly of them.one day a king showed his poems to a learned man who found them poor.this made the king s6 angrily that he sent the man into prison.some time passed and he made his mind to pardoning the man.when the man returned from prison,the king invited him to dinner.again he showed to him his poems and again asked how he thought of them.the learned man turned to the guards who stood by and said,"take him back to prison!"
"very interested in write poems" be interested in doing sth.
所以应该是用writing
"the people to who he showed his poems"应为"the people who he showed his poems to"正确的语法句序应该是这样的
sing highly of them 过去时态 应为 sang
this made the king s6 angrily 应该是very angry吧……
made his mind to pardoning the man 应该是 made his mind pardon the man
showed to him his poems 改为 showed him his poems
how he thought of them 改为 what he thought of them
所以应该是用writing
"the people to who he showed his poems"应为"the people who he showed his poems to"正确的语法句序应该是这样的
sing highly of them 过去时态 应为 sang
this made the king s6 angrily 应该是very angry吧……
made his mind to pardoning the man 应该是 made his mind pardon the man
showed to him his poems 改为 showed him his poems
how he thought of them 改为 what he thought of them