请大家帮我看看下列句子的措辞是否妥当
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请大家帮我看看下列句子的措辞是否妥当
Firstly,the author has observed that there was an increase of enrollment in online degree programs and a decrease of expenditures for school building maintainance in Humana University last year,he then assume that there is a casual relationshipbetween them.
主要是an increase of enrollment,increase能够用an吗?另外其他得分是否有错的或者表达不清楚,如果有请帮忙改正一下,
Firstly,the author has observed that there was an increase of enrollment in online degree programs and a decrease of expenditures for school building maintainance in Humana University last year,he then assume that there is a casual relationshipbetween them.
主要是an increase of enrollment,increase能够用an吗?另外其他得分是否有错的或者表达不清楚,如果有请帮忙改正一下,
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increase 能够用an.
其他的:
he之前用逗号隔开,需要有并列连词and,且assume应该是三单式,即:
...,and then he assumes that ...
再问: 哈哈,今晚有事忙吧?没见你上来答题
再答: 我在忙着看一篇论文摘要,其中机械专业术语很多,所以顾不上答题了。
其他的:
he之前用逗号隔开,需要有并列连词and,且assume应该是三单式,即:
...,and then he assumes that ...
再问: 哈哈,今晚有事忙吧?没见你上来答题
再答: 我在忙着看一篇论文摘要,其中机械专业术语很多,所以顾不上答题了。